Redoing Introductions

2nd Dec 2018, 11:00 PM in Chapter 10 - Arach's Army
Redoing Introductions
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LadyDeliz 2nd Dec 2018, 11:00 PM
LadyDeliz
Let's talk SYMBOLISM.

1.) Everything on this page is even.
2.) Rayon's armor is off; Terk's hair is down. Both parties are coming into this conversation with an unguarded approach.

I crammed a ton into the introductory panels. Even their poses were carefully thought out. I'm a little angry at how much the speech bubble in Rayon's panel covers. Behind it is a shape with three triangular points. This is supposed to be 2 things - 1, it is the Heroicits mountain range, and 2, it symbolizes a crown. (Remember, Rayon is the ex-king of Heroicits.) In case it was confusing, Terk's panel shows him wearing a green Paladin cape - the tan thing by his shoulder is the cape's clasp, and you can see the gold fringe of the cape if you follow it towards the left. Oh, and take a look at that sun that's not lighting up anything for some reason.

Comments:

VHR 3rd Dec 2018, 6:43 PM
So well done!